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This Ruined Puzzle

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Me in Truth (poem) [May. 5th, 2004|07:07 pm]
This Ruined Puzzle

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[Leaning on me till I'm grounded |artisticartistic]

This is my life as it stands
Nothing special
Nothing grand
Just trying to get by
Trying to live
Trying to learn
When to give
Wanting answers
But getting none
Trying to put myself together
While I'm slowly coming undone
It's not easy
Actually, it's rather hard
Not knowing when to trust
When it's safe to let down my guard
These walls are thick
And they carry me through
Protecting what makes me tick
From what I deem is untrue
If you want to know who I am
I may just let you see
But you have to actually give a damn
To get to know the real me
So pick your words carefully
And makes sure your actions are just
Because it's hard to find someone
To fully trust
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[User Picture]From: shinjiru_damaru
2004-05-05 08:15 pm (UTC)
oooh, sweetie!!! I Love it! One of your best ones yet, heh. Such feeling; something anyone can relate with, trust. I like it, much!

I Love you! Keep up the good stuff! ttyl
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[User Picture]From: randomimplosion
2004-05-06 02:30 pm (UTC)
TY sweetie!
Though the flow bothers me.
I feel the need to fix it.
But I won't, cause, yea, I dunno
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